General comment on draft-ietf-problem-statement-00.txt

Brian E Carpenter brian at hursley.ibm.com
Mon Mar 3 15:47:07 CET 2003


Elwyn,

...
> > I like the notion of separating root cause problems from the full
> > list of problems, but I would prefer to see the full list, in headline
> > form, as part of the main text, i.e. as section 3. The reason for this
> > is to ensure that when we get to the stage of spinning off solutions
> > work, we don't forget the specific problems. I agree with leaving
> > a lot of the details in an Appendix.
> 
> When you say 'headlines', do you mean something about the size of the current summaries in the Appendix, or an even more
> abbreviated form of the abstracts we have already made?

I think the current summaries are fine. 

   Brian


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