Document: draft-zenner-rabbit-02.txt Reviewer: john.loughney@nokia.com Review Date: Wednesday 12/14/2005 6:28 AM CST Telechat Date: Thursday 12/15/2005 Summary: I've reviewed this document for overall, general issues. I would say this document is ready, the nits can probably be fixed by the RFC Editor or during AUTH48. Nits: 1) Abstract: internet -> Internet 2) Expand IV in abstract, please. ID Nits tools found some boiler-plate issues: http://tools.ietf.org/tools/idnits/ Checking nits according to http://www.ietf.org/ID-Checklist.html: * The document seems to lack separate sections for Informative/Normative References. Checking conformance with RFC 3978/3979 boilerplate... * The document seems to lack an RFC 3979 Section 5, para 1 IPR Disclosure Acknowledgement. (rfc3979 Section 5 paragraph 1 text: "The IETF takes no position regarding the validity or scope of any Intellectual Property Rights or other rights that might be claimed to pertain to the implementation or use of the technology described in this document or the extent to which any license under such rights might or might not be available; nor does it represent that it has made any independent effort to identify any such rights. Information on the procedures with respect to rights in RFC documents can be found in BCP 78 and BCP 79.") * The document seems to lack an RFC 3979 Section 5, para 2 IPR Disclosure Acknowledgement. (rfc3979 Section 5 paragraph 2 text: "Copies of IPR disclosures made to the IETF Secretariat and any assurances of licenses to be made available, or the result of an attempt made to obtain a general license or permission for the use of such proprietary rights by implementers or users of this specification can be obtained from the IETF on-line IPR repository at http://www.ietf.org/ipr.") * The document seems to lack an RFC 3979 Section 5, para 3 IPR Disclosure Invitation. (rfc3979 Section 5 paragraph 3 text: "The IETF invites any interested party to bring to its attention any copyrights, patents or patent applications, or other proprietary rights that may cover technology that may be required to implement this standard. Please address the information to the IETF at ietf-ipr@ietf.org.") Checking nits according to http://www.ietf.org/ietf/1id-guidelines.txt: - It seems as if not all pages are separated by form feeds - found 0 form feeds but 9 pages Miscellaneous warnings: