Document: draft-zeilenga-ldap-cosine-01 Reviewer: Harald Tveit Alvestrand [harald@alvestrand.no] Review Date: Friday 1/13/2006 9:17 PM CST LC date: 4 January 2006 Summary: Ready for PS This document is clear and seems consistent. I did not attempt to check the syntaxes or whether the set of objects was complete wrt its predecessors. The descriptions prove pretty clearly to me that specifying matching rules in attribute descriptions by OID and not by name was a mistake; it makes the specs unreadable. But that's water under the bridge. Nits: In section 1, the sentence "Motivated by needs large scale directory pilots" needs s/needs/the needs of/ The RFC Editor can take care of that.