Document: draft-zeilenga-ldap-x509-01.txt
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Date: 3 June 2005

Trigger: IETF Last call, ending 10 June 2005
AD: Ted Hardie

Intended status: Proposed Standard

Summary: This document is ready for submission to the IESG, give or take 
a couple of trivial nits and subject to the caveat that I am neither an 
LDAP nor an X.509 expert.

Review:
Given that I am neither an LDAP nor an X.509 expert, I am assuming that 
such experts have checked that schema are well formed, that the relevant 
set of objects have been extracted from X.509 and the ABNF is correct. 
It appears self-consistent. Otherwise the document is ready for 
submission to the IESG.

I found a couple of trivial editorial nits:
s.1, para 3: 2nd bullet: s/updated/updates/
s.6, para 2: s/In absence/In the absence/
s.8, para 1: s/to refine LDAP/to refine the LDAP/

The acronyms GSER, DER and ABNF could do with expansion on first occurrence.