Document: draft-tesink-urn-clei-00.txt Review: John Loughney Date: 2 mars 2005 I think this document is on track, but I'd appreciate it if there was a document update, giving a definition of what CLEI is. Otherwise, I think the document is ready. minor comments: 1) Copyright should be updated to 2005. 2) Abstract shouldn't contain references. 3) Expand acronyms such as CLEI in the abstract (because I don't know what it is!) 4) Please tell us somewhere what CLEI is! 1st Google hit is Centro Latinoamericano de Estudios en Inform‡tica .... 5) Non-ASCII charaters in the document: supplierŪs