Document: draft-shacham-sipping-session-mobility-04.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 2007-09-20
IETF LC End Date: done
IESG Telechat date: 2007-09-20

Summary: Ready

Comments: I have a few editorial comments and a small concern about the security but as 
the document is not a standard track one and in fact does not specify a new protocol 
(only how to use already publishedmechanisms) I do not believe this can be a real issue.

Editorial comments:
 - ToC page 2 and 11 page 32: s/Acknowledgements/Acknowledgments/
 - 1 page 4: s/teh/the/
 - 3 page 5: s/SLP [18]Directory/SLP [18] Directory/
 - 4 page 6: s/search e.g.,/search, e.g.,/ ?
 - 5.2 page 9: please expand the "AOR" abbrev at its first use.
 - 5.3.1.2 page 13: s/active endpoint, opening/active endpoint [by] opening/ ?
 - 5.4.1 page 18 and some others: some too long lines in the examples
 - 5.4.1 page 19: s/5.3.2/5.4.2/ ? (note this is the only one which is not
   at 100% in the scope of the RFC Editor, so please check)