Document: draft-shacham-sipping-session-mobility-03.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 17 April 2007 IETF LC date: 10 May 2007 Summary: Ready Comments: some details which should be handled by the RFC editor: - 2 page 4: expand PSTN abbrev at its first use. - I don't really like the last sentence of REQ 1/Page 4 - 3 page 5: UA is expanded only at its second use (it should be once and at the first time). - 4 page 6: ie., -> i.e., - 5.2.1.2 page 12: possiblity - 5.2.2 page 14: unidectional - 5.4 page 23: expand CPL? - 6.1 page 24: twice the paragraph "If the CN and the local..." - 6.1 page 4 (next paragraph): which need -> which needs?