Document: draft-saintandre-rfc4622bis-01 Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani Review Date: 21 Aug 2007 IETF LC date: 1 Sept 2007 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard. This is a short draft that defines the use of IRIs and URIs in XMPP communications. A few nits follow: 1) In a few places, [IRI], [IDNA] et al. are used as a reference holder as well as a subject, example in S2.2: "...to convert [IRI] syntax into [IDNA] syntax ..." You may want to reconsider rewriting these as follows: "... to convert IRI syntax [IRI] into IDNA syntax [IDNA]..." for better readability. 2) S2.5: s/examples include but are not/examples include, but are not/ 3) In S2.7.2 and S2.8.2, XMPP addresses continue to the next line. Do you need LWS at the beginning of the second line to denote continuation? 4) S3.8, consider s/XXXX/this document