Document: draft-royer-calsch-cap-01.txt
From: Joel M. Halpern
Date: 22 oktober 2004 

This draft is basically ready for publication as an Experimental RFC,
but has items that should be fixed before publication.

Yes, that is the same state I assigned the previous draft.  The one
moderate comment (included here) has not in my opinion been adequately
addressed.  The comment is:

moderate:
    UID is used without including a definition.  I had assumed "User
    ID", but then I got to the example in 3.3.1 where the command
    requests the server to return 10 UIDs, and I concluded that I had
    misunderstood.  There was also some earlier text that did not make
    sense about numbers of booked objects for a UID, but probably is
    fine once one knows what a UID is.

The revision attempts to address this by adding a parenthetical at the
first use of UID which reads "(UID is defined in [iCAL])".  This
leaves the reader still unable to determine what the heck a UID is
from reading this document.  All I am asking for is a simple
definition in the list of terms.  It is fine for it to say after the
definition "for more details see [iCAL]".