Document: draft-royer-calsch-cap-00
From: Joel M. Halpern
Date: 22 september 2004

This draft is basically ready for publication as an Experimental RFC,
but has items that should be fixed before publication.

moderate:
    UID is used without including a definition.  I had assumed "User
    ID", but then I got to the example in 3.3.1 where the command
    requests the server to return 10 UIDs, and I concluded that I had
    misunderstood.  There was also some earlier text that did not make
    sense about numbers of booked objects for a UID, but probably is
    fine once one knows what a UID is.

minor:
   In section 3.1, the text says that the CUA builds a MIME
   encapsulated command command, and sends it to the CS.  However, the
   example in 3.3,1 shows that what is MIME encapsualted is rather
   more than the command.  It is a sequence of information, including
   CMD lines.  It would probably be better if 3.1 refered to a MIME
   encapsulated message, rather than a MIME encapsulated command.


Nit:
    2026 boilerplate and old intellectual property statement.