Document:  draft-miller-media-type-cellml-03.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont [Francis.Dupont@point6.net]
Review Date:  Monday 7/3/2006 1:44 PM CST
IETF LC Date:  19 July 2006

Summary: Ready

Some little comments/suggestions which can be handled in AUTH48:
the case of Format/format is not uniform, I propose Format everywhere
if it is really a part of the name, or Format the first time and format
for further cases, or format.
in 3: mathmatical -> mathematical
As the style is native (i.e,, not American) English I propose in 4 for
Author/Change "shall" in place of "will" in "... itself will not change ."

Regards

Francis.Dupont@point6.net

PS: the reference begins by "The CellML Umbrella format" so IMHO format
should be lower case everywhere in the I-D even if the reference has
no uniform use of lower case for "format"...