Document: draft-melnikov-imap-disc-06.txt Review: John Loughney Date: 16 december 2004 Review of draft-melnikov-imap-disc-06.txt Summary: The document is ready, there are some small issues to clarify or clean-up. I'd suggest an editorial pass on the document before submitting, but I don't think a DISCUSS is in order. In general, the document is readable, but a bit converstation, so a tightening up of the language would make sense. Other issues are listed below. Issues: 1) Draft header says: IMAPEXT Working Group A. Melnikov Internet Draft: IMAP4 Disconnected Access Editor Document: draft-melnikov-imap-disc-06.txt October 2004 But its an individual submission, so I think the IMAPEXT Working Group tag should be removed. 2) Editorial comments with comments/questions marked by << and >> should be removed. 3) Missing IANA considerations section Nits: 1) ToC would be nice. 2) The following text is too conversational, I suggest improving it. Let's call an IMAP command idempotent, if the result of executing the command twice sequentially is the same as the result of executing the command just once.