Document: draft-lee-ipsec-cipher-seed-01.txt
Review: Spencer Dawkins
Date: 8 april 2005 

I reviewed this document for suitability as a Proposed Standard.

My recommendation to Brian is that this document is ready for
publication. It's very well-written and well-organized, and contains
the right level of detail and right number of examples.

I agreed with the 00 version comments from the ID Tracker, but the 01
version seems very responsive to those comments.

This document does still contain two fairly important references to
web pages in the body of the draft:

- http://www.kisa.or.kr/seed/seed_eng.html and
- http://www.kisa.or.kr/seed/seed_eng.html,

plus several more in the references section.

Assuming that
ftp://ftp.rfc-editor.org/in-notes/rfc-editor/instructions2authors.txt
is current, today's instructions advise against including URLs that
can change in RFCs that can't. The RFC Editor would likely provide
guidance, though.

Further note:

I just noticed that the document contains ONE URL in TWO different places 
- sorry! but my comment still applies...