Document: draft-josefsson-mime-dns-02.txt From: Mary Barnes Date: 13 oktober 2004 Assignment: ------------ Domain Name System Media Types (Informational) - 1 of 2 draft-josefsson-mime-dns-02.txt Token: Ted Hardie Reviewer: Mary Barnes Summary: -------- Draft is ready to publish as Informational with the correction of the following editorial nits. Nits: ----- - Needs updating to new template reflecting RFC 3668/3667. - Abstract: 1st sentence: "This document register..." should read "This document registers..." - Introduction: Last paragraph, same comment as abstract. - Section 2, security considerations: "This media type identify..." should read "This media type identifies..." - Section 2, security considerations, second sentence: "This data may be security relevant according to..." should likely read something like "This data may be secured according to ...." - Section 3, Encoding considerations: "Binary transports is..." should read "Binary transport is..." - Section 3, Security considerations: Same 2 comments as for Section 2 above.