Document: draft-ietf-v6ops-ent-scenarios-05-carpenter
Reviewer: Brian E Carpenter 
Date: 16 augusti 2004


http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-v6ops-ent-scenarios 
-05.txt

 >    IPv6 Enterprise Network Scenarios (Informational) - 5 of 6
 >    Token: David Kessens
 >    REVIEWER: Brian Carpenter

Bias statement: I've read this many times during its long and painful
gestation, so I find it hard to look at this version with a new eye.

That being said, I think is now a fairly comprehensive description of  
the
items to be considered in planning deployment of IPv6 in enterprise  
networks.
More scenarios could certainly be added, but perhaps this has to wait  
for
real industry experience. So I think it is time to publish this and  
move on.

Just one nit:

>  Example Network B:
>  A bank running a large network supporting online
>  transaction processing (OLTP) across a distributed
>  multi-sited network, with access to a central database
>  on an external network from the OLTP network.
>    - External connectivity not required.
...

I can't quite reconcile "external network" and "external
connectivity not required" - this needs a little clarification.

    Brian