Document: draft-ietf-sipping-trait-authz-02 Reviewer: Spencer Dawkins [spencer@mcsr-labs.org] Review Date: Monday 2/13/2006 9:26 PM IESG Telechat Date: Thursday, 16 February 2006 Summary: This document is on the right track for publication as an Informational RFC. Review comments - Well-written and easy to follow. I think that the document might be clearer with the requirements presented first, followed by use cases and related discussion, but this is awfully late in the game to restructure WG-consensus text. Personal comments - As this work progresses beyond the requirements stage, I'm hoping that we don't develop federation-by-federation traits, because this seems nightmarishly complex to evolve as members move between federations and federations are born, merge, split, and die out. But that's probably not a reasonable observation for this document - although it will be an interesting subject for a later reviewer.