Document: draft-ietf-sipping-early-media-01.txt Reviewer: Spencer Dawkins Date: April 14, 2004 [note - same review filed for 2 documents] I had looked at these two earlier in the week, and wanted to spend more time on them, but that's not going to happen. One meta-issue - both discuss the "early media" problem, but don't say quite the same things. The authors overlap - Gonzalo should pick one presentation and include it in one draft. In general, you have to read both drafts to figure out what the relationship is between them, so a summary of the relationship would help a lot. draft-ietf-sipping-early-media-01.txt really needs to have someone go through it who's not Gonzalo or Henning - there are lots of unexpanded acronyms and references to things that they know, that aren't common knowledge in the IETF, with no pointers given. While reading it, I kept thinking how much it needed at least a couple of pictures showing the early media problem. The language is a lot rougher than in draft-ietf-sipping-early-disposition-01.txt, too. draft-ietf-sipping-early-disposition-01.txt is pretty close to ready. I didn't see any major problems.