Draft: draft-ietf-sipping-conferencing-requirements-01.txt Reviewer: Mark Allman Date: 11 May 2005 This document looks good to me. I flagged a couple of non-critical things that I would recommend tweaking (if the draft is rev-ed or via rfc-ed note): + The draft talks about the author's "feelings" about what should be included in future documents. I assume these feelings are actually WG consensus at this point and so I think this could be reworded a bit to add some credibility to the statements. + In 3.1 REQ-2 "AOR" is used without definition. + It might be nice if the requirements were numbered absolutely and not relatively. E.g., in 3.2 the first requirement would be REQ-6. This is just really for ease and preciseness of reference since then there would not be a zillion REQ-1s.