Document: draft-ietf-sip-sctp-06.txt
Review: Mary Barnes
Date: 16 februari 2005


Summary: 
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Draft is ready for publication as Proposed Standard with the
correction of the following editorial nits.  

Editorial nits: 
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- General: choose one form of spelling "signaling"/"signalling" 

- Page 4, section 3.1, Transport-Layer Fragmentation bullet, 4th
  sentence: Propose to reword from:  
" IP fragmentation increases the likelihood  
 of having packet losses and makes it difficult (when not 
 impossible) NAT and firewall traversal." 
to: 
" IP fragmentation increases the likelihood 
 of having packet losses and makes NAT and firewall traversal
 difficult, if not impossible." 

- Page 5, section 3.2, Easier parsing bullet, 2nd sentence: change
  "There is not need..." to  
"There is no need...". 

- Page 5, section 4, 1st sentence: expand this first usage of URI.