Draft:  draft-ietf-simple-xcap-11
Reviewer: Spencer Dawkins [spencer@mcsr-labs.org]
Review Date: Wednesday 6/21/2006 7:14 PM
IETF LC Date: 6/21/2006

Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as a Proposed Standard. 
There is one burst of incoherency that should be fixed. In 8.2.3, this text appears:

   Not any <bar> element may precede one or multiple <foo> elements.

I have no idea how this actually parses - was the intention that "No <bar> 
element...", or something else?

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I should also say that the updated sections seem much clearer than the 05-06 
versions of the corresponding text. Good job.