Document: draft-ietf-simple-partial-publish-06.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 2007-10-16
IETF LC End Date: none
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Ready

Comments: only minor editorial stuff which should be handled by the RFC editor (i.e., please don't rush to your keyboard :-):
 - Abstract page 2: to constitue is not in my dicts (even I understand
   well the term?)
 - TOC page 2 and 7 page 13: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments
 - 1 page 3: presentity is not in my dicts too but IMHO it doesn't matter
   as it is well introduced
 - 3.1 page 4: expilicitly -> explicitly
 - 4.2 page 6: precedures -> procedures
 - 4.3 page 7: dependant -> dependent
 - 8.2 page 14: to  Presence -> to Presence