Document:  draft-ietf-simple-event-list-05.txt
Reviewer: Lucy E. Lynch
Date: 16 september 2004 


A Session Initiation Protocol (SIP)
Event Notification Extension for Resource Lists

draft-ietf-simple-event-list-05

No Objection

This is in general a clearly written document (nice IANA section)
There are a few places where I found the use of "it is not normative"
confusing such as:

3. Overview of Operation

   This section provides an overview of the typical mode of operation of
   this extension.  It is not normative.

and

6. Example

   This section gives an example call flow.  It is not normative.  If a
   conflict arises between this call flow and the normative behavior
   described in this or any other document, the normative descriptions
   are to be followed.

Haven't seen this is other dicuments...

NITS:

draft-ietf-simple-event-list-05.txt:


  * The document claims conformance with section 10 of RFC 2026, but uses
    some RFC 3667/3668 boilerplate.  As RFC 3667/3668 replaces section 10
of
    RFC 2026, you should not claim conformance with it if you have changed
    to using RFC 3667/3668 boilerplate.

  Looks like you're using RFC 2026 boilerplate. Better change to RFC
3667/3668.
  The document seems to lack an 2026 Section 10.4(C) Copyright Notice
  -- however, there's a paragraph with a matching beginning. Boilerplate
error?
  The document seems to lack an RFC 2026 Section 10.4(C) Permission Grants
Notice
  The document seems to lack an RFC 2026 Section 10.4(C) Disclaimer
  -- however, there's a paragraph with a matching beginning. Boilerplate
error?

  Warnings:
    There are 7 instances of lines with hyphenated line breaks in the
document.

    Line 744 has weird spacing: '...erminal   pres...'
    Line 1520 has weird spacing: '...Session  Initi...'