Draft:  draft-ietf-rohc-over-reordering-03.txt
Reviewer: Michael A. Patton [MAP@MAP-NE.com]
Date: Tuesday 6/21/2005 4:32 AM CST

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC

Review comments:
On the whole I found it very well written.  Without actually going
far enough to completely understand the underlying specifics, I found
it fairly clear on expressing both the reasoning behind and the
approaches to solving each of the various problems.

I did have one minor suggestion.  Not something critical, but an idea
to consider if the document is reworked for other reasons.  There were
also a few typos that can be fixed in the preparation of an RFC of
this document.


In Section 4.1, both examples you cite for single-hop reordering are
wireless.  This might lead some to think that only wireless L2
technologies would do this.  It would help if you could mention some
other L2 technologies that do this.  FR and MPLS are probably good
candidates.


Typos
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Section 6.1.1.1: "that a least one" => "that at least one"

Section 6.1.2.1: the parenthesis is not closed.

Section 6.1.2.2: "to be cause of" => "to be the cause of"

Section 6.1.2.2: "one of the decompression attempt is"
              => "one of the decompression attempts is"

Section 6.2.2.1: "which of a value p=7" => "which a value of p=7"