Document: draft-ietf-rmt-flute-07.txt
Reviewer: John Loughney
Date: February 4, 2004

It seems that this document is 
in good shape.  It is well written. Security Considersations seems to be quite thorough. 
Boiler plate is in good order.

I would recommend the following changes:

Fairly important:
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1) The draft needs a terminology section.  FEC, Asynchronous Layered Coding,
   would be good to define.  FEC should be expanded on its first use as well.

2) Section 1.1.3, 2nd paragraph, last line:

	Thus, the inherent raw scalability of FLUTE is unlimited.

   This seems unsubstantiated, I would suggest deleting this line.


less important:
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1) Odd formatting between UDP layer & Default LCT header in section 3.4:

   |                                                               |
   +=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+
   |                Default LCT header (with TOI = 0)              |

(I thought I was seeing double at first ...)

I ran out of time to really pick at the document thoroughly, but otherwise
the document seems in good order.

John