Document: draft-ietf-psamp-sample-tech-10.txt Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani Review Date: 2 Nov 2007 IETF LC date: 5 Nov 2007 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard. Some nits: 1) the draft uses gratuitous upper-casing of many words, which tends to distract the reader. For example: "This document describes Sampling and Filtering techniques...", "...selection techniques in Metering Processes...", "...choice of Hash Function and Hash Domain.", etc. 2) Section 1: s/demand by measurement-based/demand of measurement-based/ 3) Section 5, second paragraph: s/First of all it/First of all, it/ 4) Section 6.2.2, second paragraph: about the middle of the paragraph, there appears to be a presentation error of some sort: the justification of the text is a bit off.