Draft:  draft-ietf-pkix-rfc3770bis-03.txt
Reviewer: Spencer Dawkins [spencer@mcsr-labs.org]
Date: Saturday 6/25/2005 9:07 PM CST

Summary: this document is ready for publication as Proposed Standard, 
with two suggestions.

Review comments:
In section 1, there is text that says

   Including a list of SSIDs in a certificate extension
   facilitates automated selection of an appropriate X.509 public key
   certificate without human user input.  Alternatively, a companion
   attribute certificate could contain the list of SSIDs.

The document addresses both cases (in Section 3 and in Section 4) - it 
would be nice to point to the relevant sections, in this paragraph.

In section 1.1, there is text that says

   This document is primarily same as RFC 3770.  Three changes are
   included:

while at least five changes are listed ("math is hard" ...)