Document: draft-ietf-pim-lasthop-threats-04.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 2008-05-19 IETF LC End Date: 2008-05-23 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Comments: mainly editorial comments, i.e., should be handled by the RFC Editor: - ToC and section 5 page 11: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments - Introduction page 3: abbrevs should be introduced (including PIM as the abstract is not considered as a part of the document body). - section 2 page 3: signalling -> signaling - section 2.5 page 5: behaviour -> behavior - section 2.6 page 5: TTL -> time-to-live - section 4.2 page 8: the reference to GDOI is fine but as GDOI is old and there are many newer things. IMHO you should check with the msec WG chairs if they have something to add, or for instance you could announce this last call in the msec WG list...