Document: draft-ietf-opes-iab-04.txt
Reviewer: Spencer Dawkins
Date: Feb 16, 2004

If this draft needs to be published as an RFC (why? especially since
it has normative references that will prevent its publication until
OPES is finished anyway), it's close to OK to publish. I have two
comments:

- Section 3 on "one-party consent" seems unresponsive to the IAB
concern. The authors can identify situations where one-party consent
isn't reasonable or practical, but don't name situations where
one-party consent DOES make sense. The rest of the sections seemed
like the WG "gets it". This section does not.

- The last paragraph in Section 5.1 was unclear to me. It might help
if the two entities named were not the Cable Company ISP and the Cable
Company, but it took about four reads before I could even start to
guess what this example had to do with notifications vs trace.