Document: draft-ietf-netlmm-threats-04.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 15 November 2006 IESG Telechat date: 16 November 2006 Summary: Ready Comments: I have some grammar questions which should be handled by the RFC Editor in 3.1 page 8: - can to trick -> can trick - a variety of ... which make mouting -> makes? mounting ^ ^ (if someone finds the answer for the grammar point in the web, can (s)he give a pointer? I've based my comment on French, perhaps English is different. BTW "a large number of" is plural without question). - both on-link and off-link -> either on-link or off-link?