Draft: draft-ietf-msec-gkmarch-08.txt Reviewer: Lucy Lynch Date: 9 July 2004 NO objection as informational Proving, once again, that multicast is easy ;-) "MSEC key management protocols may be used to facilitate secure one-to- many, many-to-many, or one-to-one communication." I take one-to-one is covered in the interest of completeness? NITS - I found no iana considerations section - idnits 1.31 (30 May 2004) draft-ietf-msec-gkmarch-08.txt: * The document claims conformance with section 10 of RFC 2026, but uses some RFC 3667/3668 boilerplate. As RFC 3667/3668 replaces section 10 of RFC 2026, you should not claim conformance with it if you have changed to using RFC 3667/3668 boilerplate. Checking conformance with RFC 2026 boilerplate... The document seems to lack an 2026 Section 10.4(C) Copyright Notice -- however, there's a paragraph with a matching beginning. Boilerplate error? The document seems to lack an RFC 2026 Section 10.4(C) Permission Grants Notice The document seems to lack an RFC 2026 Section 10.4(C) Disclaimer -- however, there's a paragraph with a matching beginning. Boilerplate error? There are 788 instances of too long lines in the document, -- the longest one being 5 characters in excess of 72. Warnings: There are 19 instances of lines with hyphenated line breaks in the document. Line 112 has weird spacing: '...t Draft Gro...' Line 168 has weird spacing: '...t Draft Gro...' Line 224 has weird spacing: '...t Draft Gro...' Line 280 has weird spacing: '...t Draft Gro...' Line 336 has weird spacing: '...t Draft Gro...'