Document: draft-ietf-mipshop-mis-ps-05 Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani Review Date: 6 Dec 2007 IETF LC date: 10 Dec 2007 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational. Some nits below. - S1: Consider changing the heading of bullet item 1 as follows: OLD: The Information: the information elements being exchanged. NEW: The Information Exchange: the information elements being exchanged. Rationale: In Figures 1-3, you use the label "Information Exchange". This label ties in nicely with the modified text above. - S3, first paragraph, first line: s/in the introduction mobility/in the introduction, mobility - S3, second paragraph, first line: s/In this document the/In this document, the - S4.3, Figure 3: Should the label "Transport" be "Transport over IP"?