Document: draft-ietf-mipshop-handover-key-03.txt Reviewer: Miguel Garcia Review Date: 2007-11-06 IETF LC End Date: 2007-11-14 IESG Telechat: 2007-11-15 Summary: The document is ready for publication as a proposed standard. Comments: I just have a few nits. So, feel free to discard them if you feel it. - I think the Abstract is way too long, and goes way beyond the 5-10 lines that the RFC Editor recommends (see Section 4.5 in ftp://ftp.rfc-editor.org/in-notes/rfc-editor/instructions2authors.txt ) So, I think you can leave the first two sentences of the abstract and move the rest to the Introduction section. - Try to expand acronyms at the firs occurrence. For example, CGA is not written immediately after "Cryptographically Generated Address". Other terms, such as "MAC" are never expanded. - The second author's affiliation is incorrect, so is his e-mail address.