Document: draft-ietf-mipshop-fast-mipv6-02.txt
Reviewer: <john.loughney@nokia.com>
Date: 14 september 2004 


Conflict of interest warning, the author of this draft is from the same
lab here at NRC as I am in.

Sumary: this is an experimental protocol from the MIPSHOP working group.
I think that the protocol is reasonable explained and IANA Considerations
& Security sections are covered in a reasonable manner for an experimental
document, so this should be approved.  A few nits were found.

Nits:

1) `` and '' characters should be replaced with "
2) Double blank line spacing throughout document.
3) MN abbreviation used before it is defined (section 19.
4) ``IP connectivity'' latency is used as a term, defining
   this might be a good idea.
5) IP-capable is used as a term, defining this might be a good idea.
6) Disclaimer of validity, Full Copyright Statement, etc. shouldn't be
   listed as appendicies.
7) Full Copyright Statement says: Copyright (C) The Internet Society (year).  
   probably want to fill the (year) part with 2004.