Draft: draft-ietf-mip6-mipv6-mib-07.txt Reviewer: Mary Barnes Date: Tuesday 6/7/2005 1:47 PM CST Summary: Ready with nits (based on assumption that the MIB has been approved by the MIB doctors). Review comments: These are just nits which likely can be fixed with RFC Editor notes or during AUTH48. - Needs the updated template - Dates within the MIB need updating. Also, is the LAST UPDATED date on page 7 (October 2004) still valid given the doc was last updated in March? - page 5: change the phrase "It comprises of..." to "It is comprised of" OR remove the "of" after "comprises" (3 occurrences)