Document: draft-ietf-mip6-experimental-messages-01.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 2007-09-04 IETF LC End Date: 2007-09-12 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Comments: some editorial questions: - in abstract page 1: s/header/Header/ BTW as MH is the common abbrev Mobility Header should always get the 'H'. This is not clear for Mobility Option but a choice has to be done and applied... - ToC and section 7: s/Acknowledgements/Acknowledgments/ - section 1 page 3: s/Proxy MIPv6/Proxy Mobile IPv6/ - the figure in page 3 seems a bit strange because some important and decribed fields are not in it. I believe it is directly from RFC 3775 section 6.1 "Mobility Header" which gives only the content of messages, so IMHO this section needs an explicit reference to RFC 3775 6.1.