Draft: draft-ietf-mboned-routingarch-09.txt Reviewer: Scott Brim [swb@employees.org] Review Date: 9/13/2007 IETF LC Date: 9/24/2007 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. Review: This is very good. Disregarding a few non-technical concerns about presentation, I only have a couple of technical nits that the RFC editor might not catch. Since they are small I'm only sending this to gen-art, author and AD. 2.1.1: Change "PIM-SSM" to "PIM-SM". 2.1.4: "Distance Vector Multicast Routing Protocol (DVMRP) [RFC1075] [I-D.ietf-idmr-dvmrp-v3] [I-D.ietf-idmr-dvmrp-v3-as] was the first protocol designed for multicasting, and to get around initial deployment hurdles. It also included tunneling capabilities which were part of its multicast topology functions." Is this supposed to be one sentence? If not, I don't understand the end of the first sentence.