Document: draft-ietf-mboned-mroutesec-01 Reviewer: Joel Halpern Date: June 19, 2004 This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC. Minor points: It is a little odd to find the IPR disclosure in the "Status of this Memo" section, but I suppose it works. The wording on the second paragraph of 3.2.1 is accurate, but could be clearer. In particular, a sentence indicating that many of these threats are caused by the control interaction that follows from initial data would go a long way to clarifying this. Does "The next revisions of this document" text belong in a document intended for RFC publication? (The end of section 5.2)