Draft: draft-ietf-ltru-initial-04.txt Reviewer: Elwyn Davies Review Date: Wed, 31 Aug 2005 20:34:10 +0100 LC Date: 06 Sept 2005 Summary: It is essentially ready for publication, subject to the caveat that I have not made any attempt to verify the actual proposed record contents. The document is a companion to draft-ietf-ltru-registry-12.txt. This document is generally in good shape and well written. One minor point that might be addressed if the draft is recycled for any other reason is that several of the rules in Section 2 are actually copied from the companion document. In other circumstances this might be undesirable (double maintenance etc.) but given that this draft is essentially a 'one shot' it doesn't much matter as long as they have beeen copied correctly - which appears to be the case. If the document is recycled it might be worth cross-referencing the original rules in ltru-registry. Items 3,4,5 map to s2.2.4 of ltru-registry Items 7-11 map to s3.2 and s3.3 (Item 12).