Draft:  draft-ietf-l3vpn-ppvpn-mcast-reqts-08.txt
Reviewer: Gray, Eric [Eric.Gray@marconi.com]
Review Date: Friday 9/1/2006 9:36 AM
IETF LC Date: 9/1/2006

Summary:
I have some "structural" comments/questions/observations, but I believe
this document is otherwise ready to publish as an Informational RFC.

I cannot make a judgement on the "severity" of these comments/questions
and would prefer to leave that to the AD.

Comments/Questions:

The placement of the "Contributors" section is unusual.  It occurs before
the table of contents.  What would be wrong with listing contributors in
(or around) an "Authors' Addresses" section?  I would suggest making two
subsections under "Authors' Addresses" section: Editor and Contributors.

The document makes extensive use of RFC 2119 formality, yet is intended
as an "Informational" RFC.  I believe this has happened previously, so
this is clearly not setting a precedent.   However, it does not make 
sense to me to assert "normative language" in an Informational RFC.  An
Informational RFC that does so could very easily be misrepresented as a 
"Standards Track" RFC.