Draft:  draft-ietf-l2tpext-failover-11.txt
Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan [suresh.krishnan@ericsson.com]
Review Date:  Monday 1/29/2007 5:55 PM CST
IETF LC Date: 1/29/2007

Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits
that should be fixed before publication.

Comments:

Minor:
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* IANA considerations

The IANA considerations section does not specify the namespace from 
which allocation is requested for the AVPs and the message types.


Editorial:
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* Section 4.2 Failover Session Response

This sentence has a typo and does not read well

"It is not required to respond one FSQ message with just on FSR."

I suggest removing it altogether so that the text will simply read

"An endpoint MAY choose to respond to an FSQ message with multiple FSR
  messages"