Document: draft-ietf-krb-wg-kerberos-clarifications-07
Review: Joel M. Halpern
Date: 11 oktober 2004 

As far as I can tell, this draft is ready for publication as a
Propsoed Standard RFC

nit: 2026 rather than 3667, and no intellectual property disclosure
statement.  nit: The title claims this is a clarification, while the
the document is an overview and specification.  The abstract indicates
that the reason for redoing the specification is to clarify the
previous version, but it is a full specification, not a
"clarification", and ought to be titled as such.  nit: In section 6.1
in describing the provision for the currently unused "other" types of
realms, the construct "All prefixes expect those beginning with used."
appears.  While typographically a sentence, even in context I can not
parse it at all.