Draft:  draft-ietf-kink-kink-11.txt
Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern [joel@stevecrocker.com]
Review Date: Saturday 12/10/2005 3:42 PM CST
Telechat Date: 12/15/2005

Summary: This document appears to be ready for publication as a proposed standard.
I do have one minor comment below.  This may be a result of the fact that I 
am not a security expert and may well have misread the document.

Minor:
The wording of section 6.1 describing the content of the REPLY message, 
section 6.3 text describing the CREATE message, the example of the CREATE 
sequence, and section 4.2.7 on KINK_ENCRYPT are subtly inconsistent.
a) The description of KINK_ENCRYPT should indicate that the inner types are 
the same as regular KINK types, and that KINK_ENCRYPT is specifically 
intended to be used as a wrapper around other KINK TLVs.
b) The description of the REPLY and CREATE messages should state that 
KINK_ENCRYPT is a valid TLV.  The wording lists a set of TLVs that are 
valid, and does not list KINK_ENCRYPT.