Draft:  draft-ietf-isis-wg-mib-24.txt
Reviewer: Black_David@emc.com
Review Date: Saturday 11/12/2005 8:32 PM CST
LC Date: 11/14/2005

Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that
should be fixed before publication.

Review:
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This review was done as part of IETF Last Call.  These comments
should be treated as IETF Last Call comments.

I trust that MIB Doctor review has addressed the MIB proper, hence
this review focuses on the rest of the text in the draft.

Nits:

- Section 2, Overview:

   This document is provided to the IETF working group on IS-IS.  It
   describes a management information base for the IS-IS Routing
   protocol as described in ISO 10589 [ISO10589], when it is used to
   construct routing tables for IP networks, as described in RFC 1195
   [RFC1195]. 

Remove first sentence (will no longer be appropriate when this is
published as an RFC0, and rephrase second to "This document describes ...".

- Section 6, Acknowledgements:

Was an extra "r" added to Chris Gunner's name?

- Section 7, Security Considerations

This is ok in its current form, although it would be improved with
references to specific MIB tables/objects, even as examples of how
uncontrolled write access could cause problems.  The references are
not essential, as the threat of uncontrolled write access is both
obvious and compelling as described.