Document: draft-ietf-iptel-rfc2806bis-08
Reviewer: Mark Allman
Date: June 9, 2004

 
This i-d looks fine to me; I don't have any large heartburn.  I went
through pretty quickly, but a couple of nits ...

  * The second paragraph of section 3 is pretty convoluted.  I think
    there is a clearer way to say that when using the special characters
    as delimiters they MUST NOT be escaped and when they are used as
    something other than a delimiter then they MUST be escaped.

  * Section 4, third bullet: ", The" --> ", the"

  * Section 5.1: I assume that the last paragraph means that one cannot
    assume any conventions about a telephone number -- e.g., that there
    is a strategically placed "0" or "1".  If this is the case, I think
    the statement in the document should be broadened a bit to include
    things other than the examples given.

  * Section 5.1.2: I wondered whether a context could be used to clear
    up the ambiguity of using letters in phone numbers.  (Maybe not, I
    am clearly not expert in these matters and so I might be missing
    something fundemental.)

allman