Document:  draft-ietf-ips-fcip-mib-09.txt
Reviewer:  David Black/John Loughney
Review Date:  Monday 11/28/2005 4:57 AM CST
Telechat Date:  Thursday 12/01/2005

Summary: Ready with nits.

Here is my GENART review of Definitions of Managed Objects for FCIP.

This document is basically ready, except for 2 nits.  Note that I am not
a FC nor a MIB expert, so I am assuming the MIB doctors did their job &
the WG did their job as well.

1) Please expand FCIP (and FC) in the title & abstract. Its hard to keep
track of all of the acronyms in the IETF.
2) Subsections in Section 2 need a blank line between the subsection
title & the text.

I would imagine that there might be comments during IESG review, so I'd
suggest the authors wait until there are additional IESG reviews before
reving the document.