Document:   draft-ietf-ippm-reordering-11.txt
Reviewer:  Sharon Chisholm
Review Date:  Wednesday 4/12/2006 12:34 PM CST
IETF LC Date:  10 April 2006

Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits
that should be fixed before publication.

Comments:

I felt this document was well-written and easy to understand. I have
some minor comments:

1. In section 2, first paragraph, the term 'backwards step' is used but
not defined, either explicitly or with reference to another document.
Similarly, the terms 'non-reversing reference value' is also used
without definition of reference.

2. In section 3.5, I had difficulty parsing the second paragraph my
first pass or two. Does it mean:
'It is possible to detect Sequence Discontinuities with payload byte 
   numbering, but only when the complete pattern of payload sizes is 
   stored at the Destination, or when payload size is constant and then,

   IN THIS CASE, the byte numbering adds needless complexity over
message numbering'