Draft:  draft-ietf-grow-anycast-03.txt
Reviewer: Sharon Chisholm
Review Date: Wednesday 6/7/2006 6:40 AM
IETF LC Date: 6/16/2006

Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits 
that should be fixed before publication. 

Comments:

1. The term catchment is used before it is defined. I looked it up at
dictionary.com and tried to extrapolate its meaning in this context but
did it incorrectly based on the definition in section 2.

2. In section 3.2, item number 4, it reads "information to help locate
location of traffic sources" which seems to me to either be a typo or
perhaps an awkward mixing of English and keywords?

3. There are a few cases of acronyms not being expanded upon or
referenced. Some may be considered common knowledge to the general
reader, but I'm not sure. They include NLRI in section 4.4.4.

4. In section 6.1, section item 2, wouldn't the distributed detection of
attack traffic also provide each instance with less information from
which to make decisions? Or is it expected that they share information?