Document: draft-ietf-fax-gateway-protocol-12.txt
Review: John Loughney
Date: 17 februari 2005 

This draft seems to be in the IESG for a very long time.  I'm not sure if it is really
advisable to hold this draft up any longer than it already has.

I didn't find any show-stoppers, some minor grammer issues, etc. The major nits I have, if the
drafted is revised for any reasons, would like addressed, are:

1) The abstract contains a bunch of abbreviations, such as GSTN & i-fax, etc. I suggest not using
   abbreviations until after the introduction. Abstracts shouldn't contain abbreviations.
2) Terminology / abbreviation section upfront would be nice for us i-fax novices.
3) Some spacing problems, for example missing linefeed after section 1.2 header.
4) Fax or FAX? Both forms used, please only use one form.
5) Missing page headers, page footers and line feeds.
6) Section 4.2 seems to be missing a reference to E.164 (or other) telephone numbering
   specifications.  It would be advisable if this section was a little more rigorous 
   about telephone numbering issues.  


But I wouldn't hold-up the draft on account of these nits.