Draft: draft-ietf-fax-faxservice-enum-03
Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
Date: July 5, 2004

Fundamentally this seems ready to go as PS.

I have a little concern about the security section.

1. s/Security Consideration/Security Considerations/
(in three places)

2. The third paragraph about "sacrificial" email accounts
and the non-existence of "sacrifical" E.164 numbers seems
out of place to me - it adds nothing useful, and the reader
is left wondering "why did they tell me that?".

3.
>    Due to the implications of publishing data on a globally accessible
>    database, as a principle the data subject MUST give their explicit
>    informed consent to data being published in ENUM.

I don't really see this as an RFC 2119 "MUST". Lower case would be fine.
The English in this sentence needs cleaning, too.