Document: draft-ietf-enum-xmpp-01.txt Reviewer: Miguel Garcia Review Date: 2007-04-30 IETF LC End Date: 2007-05-10 Summary: The document is basically ready for publication as a Proposed Standard. Comments: 1) The document should be a bit more clear on which registry IANA has to operate on. In particular, Section 8 does not mention the "Enumservice Registrations" registry (which is the proper name). Suggestion: modify the first paragraph in Section 8 to read: This memo requests IANA to add a new "XMPP" Enumervice to the Enumservice Registrations registry, according to the definitions in this document and RFC 3761 [1]. 2) I find a bit weird that references 2 (E.164) and 7 (XMPP) are normative. I think a reader don't need to understand E.164 or XMPP to implement this specification. As long as the reader understand ENUM, and the XMPP URI/IRI, it is sufficient from an implementation point of view. So in my opinion these references are informative.